Final Presentation Feedback

To make the presentation I had to cut down a lot of our content, there was so many different strands of ideas it appeared confusing to the viewer. So the map concept was removed and the floor wayfinding so I could create a presentation that ran a little more smoothly. I experimented with the order, making sure that there was a form of journey throughout.

Positive Feedback:

• Strong artist research, indicating our reference to neabua meant that our aims became clearer.
• The social media, particularly on Instagram works really well. The layout appears considered and aesthetically pleasing, which the modern audience will take interest in.
• The concept of the projector and acetate is really good, shows consistency and innovation.
• The strongest part is the interactive element, this will generate interest.

Design Suggestions:

• On Instagram dots could be used to count down instead of numbers. This could be linked to the motorway countdown, but with dots instead of dashes.
• The dots used in the ceiling of room 700 could be used within the design, taking inspiration from their layout. 
• The acetate invites could build on the selfie aspect and ask people to take a picture with their invite, again generating further interest.

Overall Constructive Feedback:

• The branding shows the print aspect well but it ought to represent the space more extensively.
• The content is heavy, which in turn distracts from the prints. It may have benefited from being simpler.
• The overall cost needs to be considered. The catalogue specifically needs to be stripped back in order to allow for more prints.