The Establishment Peer-led Crit - Penguin Books - Competition Brief

Feedback:

• I should remove the pen from the design, authentically a pencil would be used for a ballot paper so perhaps this could be developed further - potentially attached to a piece of string. 
• This would also mean making sure the cross is no longer written in red, perhaps in a grey colour instead.
• 'And how they get away with it' appears too separate from the title, perhaps this could be written underneath each of the titles so it is clear it is the subheading. This also links to the actual format of ballot papers, as each has a subheading with information about the candidate.
• There could also be a way to make sure that only one of the titles stands out against the rest even though they all say the same thing. This could be by making all the others faded or written in grey.