- Hand illustration or firefly works best - perhaps the hands could be opening more as if releasing the firefly.
- Consider changing the typeface so it doesn't resemble the previous cover so much.
- Change the bulb of the firefly as it looks too much like a moth - maybe elongate or change the cover.
- The red cover is most striking so consider experimenting with this further in the singular firefly designs.
- With the record designs the quote could cause some copyright issues.
- The Norwegian Wood song is primarily sung throughout the book, not played on record, so perhaps consider ways I could represent that instead.
- Is there are a way of combing the two different firefly designs?
Thursday, 14 March 2019
Norwegian Wood Cover Crit - Penguin Books - Competition Brief
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